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Particles of the Past — Chapter 11: The Threshold Engine

A quiet, institutional undercity chamber rendered in strict black, white, and gray. Stone or concrete columns dominate the frame, nearly symmetrical but subtly fractured with one column misaligned or partially absent. A single artificial overhead light isolates the center without illuminating the corners. No faces, no eyes, and no identifiable people. Any human presence is a single, small, off-center silhouette turned away. The image feels unfinished and observational, like a memory artifact that withholds more than it gives.

The city did not fear violence. It feared unpriced continuity. Zael emerged from the undercity into a service corridor that smelled like filtered air pretending it had never touched lungs. The architecture had changed — no longer inheritance, no longer stone that remembered. This was modern Luminara: clean surfaces, smooth joins, corners softened as if sharpness were a moral defect. The …